Really good.
The message was quite good and appreciated. Keep it up, keep that truth going on there, no more box life.
The ending was tight too - you showed how things do start to get better when one has their own way, own point of view, own mind. That person is also persecuted because it means the rest of those who did succumb to conformity, they have to question themselves, reinterpret their lives, and that's often very berry hard.
Well done man, as you can see it got me going, and that's a good thing - not in no box neither. Thanks!